In On Writing, Stephen King claims âoutlines are the last resource of bad fiction writers.â King suggests they limit inspiration and the joy of creativity. Jack Kerouac likely agreed, writing novels such as On The Road in a stream-of-conscious style on a long roll of paper.
Other writers tend to do extensive preparatory work, including scene breakdowns, character studies, world building, internet research, and theme development. Examples of writers who fall into this camp are Ken Follett, who outlines extensively, and Norman Mailer, who used a detailed character timeline for books like Harlotâs Ghost.
So, again, does a writer really need to outline? In my own writing, I am willing to try anything in the hope it might work. I think the most important thing is to never get rigid but to experiment, to playâin a way that is invigorating and pleasing to yourselfâthe writerâparticularly in the first draft (after you can go back and revise).Â
I have noticed that the longer and more complex a work the more likely I am to need an outline. In these cases, structure can keep you on track. It can also ensure you hit key dramatic moments. Then too, it can make the writing process seem more finite and controlled, which can help you finish a work more expeditiously.
Still, on some level though, I agree with King, that outlines, more often than not, stifle creativity. It is perhaps for this reason that I am strongly attracted to short form writingâpoems, stories, brief humor piecesâsince they require less preparatory workâand leave more room for the imagination.
The fun part of writing is discovering the storyâan alchemic process that generally defies logic. It is for this reason that many writers first produce an exploratory draft. They trust in the unconsciousâin the way a surrealist painter mightâand hope that what is dredged up will be more revelatory than anything they might have pre-planned.
There is a scene in A Clockwork Orange, where Alex, the leader of a vicious gang of droogs, notices his followers are plotting their own escapades rather methodically. Before attacking them, he states in V.O. âthat the only ones use like inspiration and what bog sends.â
Yes, Alex is a vicious criminalâand not exactly a role model. But there is something to the idea that to be truly creative you need to wing it . . . to engage in a kind of symbolic dance. This feels like jumping off a cliff without a parachute. But often excellent work comes from taking just this type of risk.
This process of taking chances informs my poetry in particularâwhere, at times, I try to hear the poem, follow it if you willâfinding the structure or style through the writing process rather than going in with a preconceived notion. I like to experiment, to wander, to try things that take me in strange directions. Instead of getting ideas then, I let them get meâa kind of zen-like process that often makes writing more dynamic.
To a certain extent this process can work for a novel too. There is an energy and power that comes from trusting your unconscious. Ironically enough, in doing so, the work just might seem as neatly planned and organized as if you had worked on an outline for months. As E.L. Doctorow once wrote: Writing a novel is like driving a car at night. You can see only as far as your headlights, but you can make the whole trip that way.
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Great article! Thanks for the encouragement to experiment. After all, how could I possibly have written an outline when I had no idea what my people were going to do? đ I started with a scrap of an idea, got to know my characters, and pretty much gave them free rein. After I saw where they were going with the story, (which is not what I would have planned if I HAD planned,) *then* I built what I’m calling a “trackline” — a loose (VERY loose) outline to track what has happened, what needs to happen for a coherent story, and what I need to do to fill in. Sounds weird, I know, but it’s working for me.
Good article. I am a “by the seat of my pants” writer. I tried an outline and found myself drifting away from the outline constantly. Thanks for the article, Lisa.
You’re welcome, Marianne. I’m not much for outlines eitherâat least not the kind we were taught to write in schoolâbut I think Matt wrote an excellent article.